The Story of Freelan — Ouch! Life Gets Thorny!

Terry Haskill had lots of convivial company during his life, but now…

See also on my website: How a Simple Romance Grew and Dealing with Life’s Thorns

This is another peek at my ever-growing, kudzu-like work of literary fiction, involving romance, drama, mystery (who’s really behind some of the tricks being played?), and above all a struggle to live truly free lives.

Jim O’Connell has bought up quite a few properties in Hammil Valley, saving people from bankruptcy or from working themselves literally into the ground. One of the properties he has offered to buy several times is owned by Terry Haskill. And now the time has come. Terry’s finding life a bit too thorny these days.

The Excerpt

Terry Haskill had worked as a tiler for forty years, gaining quite a reputation for the excellence of his work as well as his in-depth knowledge of tile, granite, marble, and related materials. His artistry had made him the tiler within Owens Valley and the surrounding areas. Even those celebrities who had their “ski homes” in Mammoth Lakes, the ski resort town on Mammoth Mountain, had used him.

As Terry’s reputation and income had grown and after about ten years of marriage, he and his wife had decided to go for a bigger home for them, their two sons, and their daughter, and so friends and family could visit and stay overnight or longer. They had bought a piece of land with an artesian spring beside the White Mountains and sold their house in Bishop for enough money to pay for building their dream home. They had lived in a small trailer near the construction site while the house was being built. Ted Waters, a local architect who had designed the Round House, had drawn up the plans. Terry and a friend did the foundation, framing, and exterior. And Terry finished off a lot of the interior himself, with help from his children. Naturally, he used ceramic tiles on the kitchen and bathroom walls and even laid the stone flooring that ran through the house except the bedrooms. There were six bedrooms—a master suite, a bedroom apiece for their three children, one for a housekeeper, and one for overnight guests. When the house was finished, it had seemed to nestle naturally into the high desert terrain, as Terry had hoped it would. It became an example of fine local architecture.

For a few years, Terry had had that family-and-friend ambiance he had wanted. His parents had stayed in that guest room on a regular basis. And his children had had friends stay for sleepovers. Terry and his wife had had a lot of his customers in for Friday night cookouts. Terry had felt happy and fulfilled. Then his parents became too frail to travel and stopped visiting, eventually passing away in a nursing home. His children grew up and moved away, there being no real job opportunities for them in the area at that time, and their college degrees in various fields made them in demand elsewhere. One son was in Silicon Valley building up a successful internet company. The other son was a professor at Harvard. Terry’s daughter was a consultant with the CEOs of Fortune 500 companies in the United States and elsewhere, traveling widely and almost never getting back home, especially after Terry’s wife had died suddenly one harsh winter of pneumonia.

A man who had been used to having a lot of people around—his wife, his children, their friends, his parents, and business clients in both Bishop and the tri-valley area—now found himself all alone and not able to handle it. Terry needed people around him. He needed their attention on him, their adoration. And no matter what it cost, he’d have it again.

Terry had begun achieving that goal by inviting friends over for an evening of food and fun. Some would bring along a female friend and a case or two of Scotch whiskey or other beverage of choice to supplement whatever Terry was serving. Things had grown from there with people from Los Angeles and Reno hearing about the parties and joining in. Even a couple of Mono County Sheriff Department staff, unbeknownst to Sheriff Ken Matthews, had dropped by a few times and had chosen to ignore some of the goings on, such as money changing hands in exchange for drugs and sexual favors. After all, it was a private party.

Jim’s attendance at one of these party evenings surprised most of the people already there. But his mission required that he see the goings on for himself and not rely on rumors.

“Terry!” called out Jim over the loud music.

Terry looked over in Jim’s direction with wide eyes, smiled, and waved. Jim waved back and made his way through the throngs of people and up to Terry.

“So, you decided to cut loose a little,” shouted Terry over the noise.

Jim just smiled and said, “Quite a place you have. Let’s go have a nice talk, maybe outside. The night’s warm, and I can’t hear myself think in here.”

Terry nodded and followed Jim outside to the patio between the house and the pool filled from his artesian spring. The moonlight reflected gently and peacefully on the quiet surface of the pool water in contrast to the party noise inside. Jim smiled at the serene reflection and also admired the craftsmanship of the tile work around the edge of the pool. And what he had seen so far of the house inside and outside was indicative of a true artisan, nothing slap-dash or hurried. Terry had taken the time to be sure everything was done right, even though he and his family had been living in a trailer during the construction.

Standing near the pool, Jim said genuinely, “You built a very nice home here, Terry. Great workmanship.”

Noise from the party going on inside the house drifted out in bits through the open patio doors.

“So, what’s up?” asked Terry, moving away from a couple who were getting rather hot and heavy in the shadows beside the house. “This is the first time you’ve accepted an invitation.”

He looked at Jim intensely, waiting and watching.

“I heard your eldest son has invited you out to Silicon Valley to live with him and his husband,” began Jim carefully. “Just wondering if that’s so, and if it is…”

“And if it is,” Terry continued Jim’s sentence, “would I sell this place?” He chuckled. “Yes, it’s true. He wants me out there because he doesn’t approve of my lifestyle here.” His chuckle turned into a hearty laugh. “Imagine that. My gay son doesn’t approve of my lifestyle! How times have changed.”

“He’s a good person and a considerate son who’s probably thinking of your health and how a lot of these people just sponge off of you,” added Jim in a totally serious tone.

Terry became angry, declaring vehemently, “They’re my friends! What would you know about friends? Do you even have any? Seems like everywhere you go, you make enemies by the dozen.”

“But Terry, they’re not your friends,” replied Jim calmly, ignoring the barb that he knew was based on unfounded rumors and not wanting to be goaded into anger or for Terry to burst out in a tirade at hearing the truth.

Instead of getting angrier, Terry seemed to collapse inside, his shoulders hunching and his back curving forward like a very tired old man, which is exactly how he felt at that moment.

“I know,” he said softly. “I just can’t take the solitude.”

He dropped into one of the chairs around the patio table and Jim sat in a chair next to him.

“Look, Terry, my offer still stands,” said Jim, looking at Terry with a serious gaze and a touch of sympathy. “You’re a good man inside. All the goings on here are just your way of filling that void in your heart. It could be your true salvation to live with your son in Silicon Valley, getting free of the moochers who had latched onto you through your loneliness and generous spirit.”

Terry looked down at the table surface, saying calmly as if he knew this decision was inevitable and that he had just wanted the right moment, “Good of you, Jim. I think the time has certainly come. This whole business is wearing on me. Tough to leave this house, though.” He looked up and around him. “So many memories.”

Jim sat silent and nodded in understanding. He knew the parties that had been going on at Terry’s house were not reflective of Terry’s true nature. Terry had built a business and career, been a loving son, husband, and father, and prospered by his own wit and uncompromising work ethic. He had dug out his own success in the vast rural and remote environment of the Eastern Sierra, which was no easy task, and Jim greatly admired him for that.

“There’s no hurry,” said Jim finally. “I just wanted to let you know for whenever you’re ready.”

Jim didn’t want to mention the email he’d gotten from Terry’s son in San Francisco, encouraging Jim to approach Terry again about the possibility of purchasing the property and thus making the move to that city a very logical step. Jim had chosen a Friday night to see the parties and was more convinced than ever that Terry’s son was doing the right thing.

“No, no, I want to do this right away—as soon as it can be arranged,” said Terry with a tone of finality.

A brief moment of silence passed between them. Then someone inside the house called out for Terry.

He broke the silence and said to Jim in a tired, confidential voice, “The time has come. I’ll call you in the next couple of days. Now, if you’ll please excuse me.”

He stood, shook Jim’s hand in appreciation, and went back into the house, assuming the role of party host again while Jim remained seated.

Well, now, doesn’t that sound like a great solution?

Unfortunately, Jim solves Terry’s problem but finds himself in another. Sigh. Life’s thorns seem inescapable.

Here’s wishing you a less-thorny life!

Thanks for reading here. And thanks, @Kathrine Elaine, for Thorny Thursdays!

Keep being inspired! Keep writing! Don’t let the naysayers get you down.

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The Story of Freelan — Dealing with Life’s Thorns

With a name like “Rose,” life has to be thorny—and so does love!

Note: The photos used here were found online and are used merely as representations to help me keep the characters’ appearance in mind. They are in no way connected with my writings.

See also: How a Simple Romance Grew

The Freelan series has been like kudzu, ever expanding and growing—in my mind and in the files on my laptop. As I go back and reread where it all began in January, 2019, I find myself doing major edits but also seeing some things in a new light.

A manuscript that started out as a romance soon turned into a quest for living a truly free life, but the romance elements remain. Here’s a small taste.

Rose Wilson, newly widowed, has a problem:

“Jim O’Connell’s not going to buy me out!”

And Rose is dealing with the first signs of her attraction to Jim, shoving them away:

Rose looked up at Jim standing across from her, taking in his ruggedly handsome appearance enhanced by the jacket and tie. He held a coffee cup in one hand and his cowboy hat in the other, his dark curly hair in need of a good haircut. She quickly looked back down, feeling her face flush, and continued sipping her tea.

Jim is “the man who owns most of Hammil Valley” in eastern California. And he wants to buy the Wilson Ranch now that Carl Wilson, Rose’s husband, is dead. He lets her know at the gathering following the memorial service for Carl:

Jim looked Rose squarely in the eye across the table, and said, “I’m sorry for your loss, Rose, and I don’t mean to intrude, but I only wish to say that my offer still stands. That ranch is a handful.”

Uh oh! Jim just made a big error:

“How dare you say that right after my husband’s memorial service!” she shot back, rising from her seat and storming away.

All this is witnessed by their mutual friends, Henry and Katherine Baum, and Henry tells Jim:

“Don’t worry about Rose. She’s just rather defensive right now. I think she got a few surprises today. The truth can really leave a big knot in the pit of one’s stomach. Be patient. Let her learn what she needs to know.”

And some of what Rose needs to know is that she has been told a lot of lies about Jim. Sooner or later, she has to sort fact from fiction.

It’s a thorny road to true love—or not? And there are a lot of bumps in that road in addition to those thorns!

Hope you enjoyed this peek into the world of my Freelan series which I hope will be published some day.

Thanks for reading here.

Keep being inspired! Keep writing! Don’t let the naysayers get you down.

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The Story of Freelan — From Villain to Hero

A little something different (i.e., not a story) for this day

Note: the man in the image above was found online; he’s an actor, but I forgot his name; he just looks like how I see Peter looking in my mind and helped me keep that image while writing. This actor is in no way connected with my writings.

Peter Thorn is a fictional character in my Freelan novel series that, no pun intended, really sticks in my mind. (Well, okay, the pun was intended.)

I put up a little about him in a note on 29 Feb 2024 08:53 am. To save you the fuss, here it is:

Happy Leap Day, and time for a Thorny Thursday romance. Well, actually, just the hint of one that appears in my Freelan Series of novels. As mentioned in my Warrior Wednesday post, Peter Thorn transitions from villain to a warrior for freedom. But warriors don’t always win in the battle of love. Peter’s year-long courtship with Caroline Taylor, years younger and the sheltered daughter of Emmanuel and Jessica Taylor, is conducted under the watchful eye not only of her parents but also her two older brothers, her aunt and uncle who live nearby and another uncle who lives a short distance away. Tough to get to know much about each other in such circumstances. And a surprise or two is on the horizon. Peter Thorn’s romance is indeed thorny!

See original note here.

Interesting, and thus lasting, characters change during a story. Peter’s change began before he even appears in part 1 of Freelan: The Dawning. We first see him when he is teetering on the brink of self-destruction—alcohol, drugs, casual sex, and thoughts of suicide—as he wonders where his life is going. He is 25 years old, grew up in an atmosphere of detesting achievers and producers in the world, and saw his parents, living off a trust fund his grandfather had set up, descending into a life of utter decadence and hedonism. Life seems meaningless and corrupt. To survive, sooner or later Peter has to wake up, right? Absolutely. How that happens is a big part of the story.

But it has also spurred me to write an additional novel in the series about his early life. It would be a prequel and cover the years from early childhood until shortly after he appears in the Freelan novels.

Here’s the opening as of this date (subject to change):

The face of a man in his early fifties with a full head of dark brown, curly hair with hints of gray, and bright blue eyes that exuded happiness as he smiled down at the infant in the crib was the earliest memory in Peter Mahanidhi Thorn’s massive information storage house—his brain. He was two days old. And the man was his grandfather, Peter O’Gara Thorn, after whom the infant was named—well, at least the first name.

The infant’s parents, Genevieve and Stacey Thorn, watched all this. They were in the hospital room in San Francisco. Genevieve lay back in bed. Stacey stood next to her, holding her hand. They both had one thought in mind: “We have to be sure the baby survives to his first birthday before that old money-grubbing, profiteering asshole will give us access to that trust fund.”

A young life begins. How it goes from here and how he becomes so messed up… well, that’s the story.

And so it goes in Freelan. Hope you enjoyed this glimpse into that world. More to come in the days ahead, and thanks for reading!

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The Story of Freelan: The Creed of Farmers & Ranchers

The Story of Freelan — The Creed of Farmers & Ranchers

The First of April is here but there are no April Fools in Freelan!

One of Aesop’s fables tells of a father with several sons who were constantly squabbling. The father told each son to bring him a long stick. When they did, he took a stick and broke it easily over his knee. Then he bundled the remaining sticks and tried to break that bundle over his knee but couldn’t. The moral: strength in numbers (I’m paraphrasing).

So, what does this have to do with Freelan?

For one thing, they know there is strength in numbers. But they also know that those “numbers,” i.e., individuals, must choose to work together, that coercion is not part of a free society. No law, regulation, ordinance, or mandate or any other form of force are justified. In fact, free people tend to band together in emergencies more readily, mainly because they are used to seeing themselves as the problem solvers, not some government entity. To Freelanians, this is an extension of what is known as the Creed of Farmers and Ranchers.

Some excerpts from that creed as expressed by Jim O’Connell (one of the main characters) in a conversation with Rose Wilson (another main character):

“Farmers and ranchers tend to be very private, productive, proud, self-reliant individuals,” he [Jim] began. “They respect property rights and are good stewards of their own property. They have to be to survive.”

“Yes,” said Rose. “I can see that.”

Jim smiled. “Glad to hear it. They also work extremely hard, take that work seriously, take all kinds of risks, rarely taking any time out for themselves, and avoid asking for help even when things seem dire. They regard it as shameful to be a burden on anyone, especially their neighbors. On the other hand, they tend to look out for each other and will drop their work and rush to their neighbor’s side during any emergency or crisis to try to help. I’ve seen this myself. … What most people don’t understand is that, while these farmers and ranchers do genuinely care about others, it’s not their primary motive in life—nor should it be. They don’t rush to help out of altruism or selflessness. Not really. As I said, it’s about self-preservation… When they see a self-reliant, productive fellow farmer or rancher suddenly facing a crisis, they rush to help for very selfish reasons.”

“How is it selfish to help others?” asked Rose, looking confused, her brow slightly furrowed.

“Well,” replied Jim, “if they can help a distressed neighbor, even a competitor, get back on his own feet and back to being productive, then no one becomes a burden, and everyone benefits individually in the end. And the quicker that can happen, the better for everyone, especially for those in crisis. That’s the primary selfish part, but most of them would probably never admit it.”

“I see,” said Rose thoughtfully, the furrow deepening a little as she pondered his words. “Was that why you bought properties whose owners were about to go bankrupt?”

Rose flushed as she said it, but Jim didn’t seem to take any offense.

“Well, I was achieving a goal and helping them, too.”

“Oh.”

“This helpfulness also preserves a private honor and dignity for everyone,” added Jim, saying his words carefully and clearly and giving her time to soak them in. “Farmers and ranchers are generally proud, productive individuals and don’t like others butting into their affairs. Helping each other assures they can generally live a peaceful, voluntary, un-coerced association among themselves.” Jim shook his head, sighed, and remarked, “That’s changing with more government interference into agriculture and business. I’ve seen it and dealt with it before and since moving here. … It’s a free man’s type of creed, an individual’s type of creed. Governments just need to get out of the way and let private individuals voluntarily associate or help each other in the best ways they see fit, ways that benefit themselves and others. Sort of a value-for-value trade type of thing. Not only in products, but also in relationships.”

“Relationships?” Rose blushed a little at that.

“Sure,” said Jim. “You pay Chuck. He, in turn, does essential work around the ranch. You both benefit. But the same works in friendships. When time allows, Henry, Katherine, and I enjoy each other’s company away from work, as you also do. We trade each other’s personal value with our camaraderie. Each benefits from the relationship.”

“Oh, I see,” said Rose, a lot of what Jim was saying beginning to sink in.

Jim added, “It’s a little different in a crisis, though, where people offering the help generally impose no obligations on those being helped. The only possible obligation there might be is for them to get back to work and continue being productive. The way I see it, that’s the exchange of value—a very individual and personal matter between those who trade, as in freedom it can only be. A trade of value is set by individuals where both sides benefit; it is not open to public or political discussion.”

Jim paused a moment, took another sip of coffee, gave Rose a minute to think about what he said, and then continued.

“Though most people know it as a farmer or rancher creed, Henry prefers to call it ‘The Creed of the Individual’. He says the name reflects more actual individuals acting together in voluntary consent without outside interference, such as government intrusion or decree, to help each other in rough times so all can get back to being productive and independent. An application of rational individualism, a once-great American tradition. I tend to agree with his observation that this thinking applies to everyone, though most people think this just applies to farmers or ranchers.”

Jim paused again and then said in a musing sort of way, “Henry was my catalyst. He spurred me to do so much here. I was lost, adrift, knowing that there was a problem in the world but not sure what it was or what to do about it.” He laughed lightly and added, “And now I like to be a catalyst to others—a variation on that creed.”

Rose reflected a moment and then said, “That creed sounds a bit like the old Midwest barn raising I’ve heard about or seen in the movies,” she said. “When a new farmer starts out, or a farmer’s barn burns down, everyone in the nearby area comes to help build a new barn. Once that’s done and quickly, they can all then get back to their own work and not bear a burden from the new people or those who lost their barn.”

Jim looked at Rose with a slight smile and replied, “Exactly. Same creed.”

And so it goes in Freelan. Hope you enjoyed this glimpse into that world. More to come in the days ahead, and thanks for reading!

Please visit my author site for more on this novel series in progress and other writings, including my newly published book of ten eerie tales. And thanks for reading.

NOTE: None of my text or images are AI-generated. You can rest assured that I pulled it all out of that stuff in my skull called a “brain.”

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The Freelan Gazette is now The Story of Freelan

Thanks to all of you who subscribed to The Freelan Gazette. As fun as it was to write, the time needed has become too much and my focus is moving more to the whole process of refining the 3million+ words series (so far) and push for publication. In place of the gazette will be periodic articles on that process under the heading “The Story of Freelan.” I hope you will take time to check them out and that the information in them will in some way help you as a writer.

Here is the first article:

A story that developed a life far beyond my initial intentions

Lest anyone think that my fiction writing steers toward the gory, as shown in my latest Thorny Thursday story, this section is devoted to my serious writing as opposed to the shorter items. It all grew out of what was supposed to be a romance novel.

Once upon a time, Hubby and I lived on a ten-acre ranchette in a valley. We endured a couple years (long story) and then moved on. But that valley became the setting for the Freelan novel series.

And it all began with, “Sweetie, why not write a romance novel set in that valley?”

Hubby had asked it one day as we were on a long drive to our new home.

“A romance?” I had asked back, wriggling up my nose as if I smelled skunk spray. “You mean those ‘Oh, her heaving bosom’ and ‘His well-muscled torso’ things?”

“No, just a nice love story,” he had replied.

And the conversation had gone back and forth from there. In the end, I had said I would give it a go, making no promises since my background was in shorter fiction and in non-fiction (articles, website content, user guides, white papers, system documentation—things like that). Once settled into our new home, I had carried through with that sorta commitment and sat down at the laptop, drafting Hammil Valley Rose (the original title) in about a month. It was about 150K words, well past the word limit most romance publishers wanted, and that was fine since the story had grown far past the Hallmark movie stage.

Things began simply enough. A widow, now the sole owner of a 100-acre ranch in the valley is preparing to hold a memorial service for her deceased husband in a nearby town. And during that, she does her best to avoid her rancher neighbor, the man who owns most of the land in the valley and who wants her ranch, willing to do anything to get it, or so her husband had told her during their brief six months of marriage.

Sounds like a good setting for ye olde traditional romance.

The story then took a life of its own even though still headed toward the ultimate romantic ending. And the reason for that was clear. A lot of ideas built up inside me over decades of existence had found a home. Rose, the widow, and Jim, the rancher neighbor, were in a way symbols—she of those who believe that capitalism is terrible, and he of those who practiced laissez-faire capitalism in a very self-respecting manner. But then another element popped up—Sid, the man who hates Jim and uses Rose, seeing Jim’s growing admiration for her, against Jim.

And then my husband had started asking me how the novel was going. I would explain things as best I could, and then he would suggest things, such as, “Have the people in Sacramento send someone to the valley to spy on them and cause trouble.” Thus, the character of Peter Thorn was introduced. I had Sid, a typical crony businessman, encourage a buddy in the State government to send Peter to the valley. But Peter didn’t want to be an antagonist, so he morphed quickly into a protagonist. Sid fumed and took another tack to seek revenge on his enemy.

Things have definitely steamrolled from there, and I will be presenting bits of what developed along with the process behind the series here in future. Hope you enjoy them! A peek inside a writer’s brain.